My fourth page and with it some more ideas. More solid pastel colours, less wash grey... maybe just a bit.
I want to choose limited colours and reflect the situation/environment.
Another note, not happy with anatomy. Going to have to go back to using reference. I'm sure most great comic artists do anyway, but i like to draw straight from imagination. Oh well until my muscle memory gets better, back to the digicam!
Like the drop shadow for narration box though :p